Some people believe that a car is the better way of travelling in cities, others think it is bicycles.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that motor vehicles are a more preferable option for touring the city while others think bicycles are better. In my opinion, I believe moving around city centers is better done using cars as will be discussed subsequently.
On the one hand, people believe that using bicycles to move around in cities is cheaper as they do not get to spend so much on its maintenance. This is because, very minimal amount is spent on maintaining the bicycle and fixing its parts. Also, bicycles do not require premium motor spirit or even water to function properly. Furthermore, it is easier, faster and more convenient to go about town with bicycles as they are not easily affected by traffic congestion. This is as a result of the availability of bike routes in majority of well-structured cities.
For example, It is cheaper to run errands within the town using a bicycle irrespective of the pump price of fuel and also not having to bother about traffic congestion as one can easily move from one point to the other without encountering any challenges.
On the other hand, when it comes to moving around city centers, it is posited that using cars are a better option because, the carrying capacity of a car is more as compared to that of a bicycle hence, it allows for the movement of more than one person per time to a given destination which gives room for numerous group activities even while on a journey. Additionally, the car protects the people in it from harsh weather conditions such as rain, sun, wind and dust and also from external intrusion. Take for instance, Robbers are unable to easily steal from commuters when in small traffic congestion since car doors can be locked from the inside of the car to secure them.
In conclusion, although some believe that bicycles are better than cars for movement within cities because its maintenance is less expensive and it can be a faster means for running errands, I think cars are better as they are more secure and have a higher carrying capacity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the carrying capacity of a car is more as compared to that of a bicycle hence it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68091168091 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50513389146 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475783475783 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 351.0 20.2975951904 1729% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1643.0 106.682146367 1540% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 351.0 20.7667163134 1690% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 148.0 7.06120827912 2096% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288182135668 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288182135668 0.084324248473 342% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184855250441 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120381306307 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 176.1 13.0946893788 1345% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -284.79 50.2224549098 -567% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 140.2 11.3001002004 1241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.06 8.58950901804 280% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 142.4 10.1190380762 1407% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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