Some people believe that children’s time outside of the school be filled with other activities such as music, art, and sports. Others feel that children should spend time relaxing at home.
To What extent do you agree or disagree?
The competition between the young children is growing as fast as one can think, which has eventually forced people to flow the ideology that youngsters should spend their free time in pursuing other activities such as art, music, and sports, while some others say they should rather spend time relaxing at home. However, in my point of view, I think that making them learn these activities makes them learn values which are necessary for the future and enables them to pursue these things at a higher level.
Finding free time in the busy timetable of children is a tough task these days and replacing it with different things helps children to adapt to a different type of environment in the surroundings. Also, these recreational activities teach them social values such as teamwork, leadership, and hard work, which can't be taught while sitting at home. Additionally, a study conducted by the Time of India showed that children who were engaged in such type of things have better ability to handle pressure in extreme situations, so making them friendly with the external thing which they will have to face tomorrow, can help them to do better than others.
Secondly, there is a number of students who want to pursue different things than studying and follow the conventional way. In such a case giving them more options can increase the chances that young and talented children may wish to build their future in the same. Moreover, around 70% of the artist leading the table in their field are the ones who started in their early childhood. Even considering my personal case, where I started playing soccer at 2 grade and eventually turned to be a professional footballer.
To conclude, although the schedule of children is getting busy day by day, in such a case letting them stay at home to relax and spend the most precious time can be proved worthless. Meanwhile, children should be more focused on looking out to different kind of activities and even I stand with the same motion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mwork, leadership, and hard work, which cant be taught while sitting at home. Additi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87941176471 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54993554434 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6135694492 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.818181818 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9090909091 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291655893073 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106587290149 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107849721978 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184345831217 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880224085895 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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