It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Over, the years the growing competition in the field of arts and sports has eventually lead people to believe that children are born with innate talent, while others still claim that if governed under regular practice anyone can excel in these filed of are. In this essay, I will discuss both the sides of arguments.
Firstly, no one can deny that there is some percentage of people which have an inborn talent, which can be easily looked out in the earlier childhood, which provides them with extra ease of pursuing such activities when compared to others. Moreover, these talents enable them to guide through and make remarkable achievements in the near future. For instance, Peter Green, a great musician started composing songs from an age of 10 and further turning up 17 he won the best artist award for making an extraordinary contribution to this industry.
On the other hand, people generally tend to chase anything which is hard to purse and then excel in it. Although such practices need a high level of motivation and determination by the individual. It is also observed that children building up such skills tend to acquire almost double time to expertise in such areas, excluding some natural exceptions. Considering, my personal case wherein I started professional football training, took me almost 10 years of commitment to have a better hand than others.
To conclude, in fact, all things in the surroundings are achievable for children if performed regularly. However, having talent deep inside one's genes empower them to hold better understanding while becoming a great sportsperson and musicians.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, while, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14716981132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7602322664 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2363115001 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19843700237 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058733004108 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426067215728 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10480413645 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470311056526 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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