individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
The increasing global warming, pollution, and other environmental problems have pushed people to believe that only the government and big companies can solve and make any difference in the situation. However, I believe that a blend of togetherness is very essential to overcome as sometimes the government is incapable to influence our choices, as well as personal, can also make an impact big changes.
First, it is a social duty of an individual to pay attention to the environment and surrounding places. As the government can only make laws and whether to follow or overrule them is a personal choice. For instance, people can create awareness among the society and neighborhood so that people are more concern about this problem. For instance, in my society, only a single newspaper is allowed to be delivered and that needs to be shared among the family as a step to reduce paper waste. Overall rather than depending upon the government, persons, these days have enough power and knowledge to improve things around.
Secondly, regardless of the individual effort, government, big companies, and institutions should tell people to follow certain measures as sometimes people only follow those rules which are imposed with a heavy fine. For instance, Dell India has forced its employee to come via public transport or carpool as a set to reduce traffic jams and issues related to parking. Moreover people now days spent more time in offices than at home, so in such a case making any change in the habits can be easily followed at home.
To conclude, however, the increasing environmental problems is a hot topic of debate over which the government role is can just cover a small part. Although I think a plan which contributes both individual and government involvement is a must to overcome as both have a certain degree of power over the actions taken.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99678456592 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80143483553 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4436398963 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20047440603 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742119162206 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607842593267 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123476769345 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462477625782 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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