It is clear that human beings want to make their time distinctive fun and try to puzzle things out. Some people believe that kids should spend their spare time with the activities which consist of fascinating educational ones otherwise they squander a number of chances in their life. I completely agree with this idea and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
There are several benefits of organising mental activities with full of pleasure. For me, every activity should be stimulating but complex and of course appropriate form for youngers. Since the activity is interesting, during playing it children would not be bored .
Not only that, kids also keep profit if activity is successful. For instance, by playing the game you can make your child 's time profitable. They can get any useful information, improve their thoughts and would views. It provides child's future.
Having said that it is undeniable that educational games are little bit heavy for kids. If we force our children to play the games which are only mentally, it causes them to stress and bored. Moreover, they are also allowed to play the games that are enjoyable and relaxing.
To sum up, although there is no doubt there are some heaviness for youngers entertaining, I firmly believe that benefits outweigh the drawbacks. However, it should be said that not every child is weak pointed for playing the activity which is educational.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, no doubt, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00420168067 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62383466027 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3993539991 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223723672199 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656799435471 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443237842188 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114353657176 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352311779056 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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