What are the advantages and disadvantage of using CCTV cameras to fight crime
Nowadays, comfort of living is being developing by inventing of new style technologies such as CCTV cameras. The security cameras is one of the wonders of modern technology , which are used in many countries ' streets , offices and homes. However , just like other inventions security cameras have positives and negatives as well. In this essay , I will discuss some of the benefits and some of the challenges . Let's begin by looking at the advantages. One of the main positives of using security cameras is that it prevents crime. What I mean by this is that whether you install the cameras in your home or workplaces you can prevent crime from occurring. This can make you feel a sense of security which is priceless .
Secondly , a camera system provides people with an increased sense of security and reassurance particularly in areas where the crime rate is high. Many of the more advanced models are wireless meaning that they can be viewed and monitored from your smart phones. This gives you the ability to check in.
Turning to the other side of the argument , unwanted controlling is the major problem. Some companies use the CCTV cameras to check up the actions of the employees and workplaces. But , it can because for debating among the employees who do not want to being under control .
Another issue is that it causes damaging. What's more , when we as users of security cameras try to keep ourselves updated on the latest in security systems , we should not forget criminals are doing the same too. A clever trespassers will probably know all about them and may have figured out a way to go undetected.
All these considered , using CCTV cameras is requirements of the changing world. Although , there are good sides of fighting crime and informing by non-acting and some drawbacks of controlling without permission of workers and has a way to disable them from their power source , I firmly believe that benefits of using security cameras eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95195195195 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6773391147 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591591591592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.850413589 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7894736842 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256660323829 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709774298907 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813149293933 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132096310031 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733028415103 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.