Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum . How far do you agree disagree .
Holistic education is incomplete without inducting sports and physical education. Contrary to this, a few people opine of not having competitive sports including both team sports and solitary as a full-time subject in education institutes. In my opinion, I agree to the statement as almost all institutes have inducted sports in their curriculum, but absence of facilities and interest defeats the purpose.
To embark on, professional sporting requires a cutting-edge infrastructure which comes at a hefty cost. Set aside schools, even developed countries do not own them. For instance, Oman is hosting the next soccer world cup<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="cup "></span>, and it had started constructing stadiums only after it won the hosting-bid. Because of its capital-intensive nature, sports curriculum at schools has been reduced to mere playing time for the participants. Therefore, many aspiring sportsmen resort to a solitaire sports academy in their area which often gets overcrowded as it inducts more than its capacity.
Secondly, most nations are aligned to a particular game that other sports are not followed. For example, almost all Latin-American nations are crazy about football that it becomes difficult for anyone to develop interest for other games. Additionally, the availability of quality mentors for these off-beat sports are rare and are often expensive. While students are fond of playing the famous sports of their nations, only a few are left to pursue other games which is often symbolic and participating. Therefore, it becomes tough to have all events at level playing field.
In conclusion, competitive sports both as a team and personal participation requires professionalism. However, educational institutes often have them as notional event. Therefore, adherence to strong professionalism, good coaching and infrastructure is required to excel in competitive events.
- Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in richcountries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specificreasons and examples to support your answer. 89
- Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum . How far do you agree disagree . 84
- Nowadays for many people, the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sive. While students are fond of playing the famous sports of their nations, only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80701754386 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75534665525 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9702526105 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102241963982 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370294543847 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475676035361 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073417308793 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521213922424 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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