Undoubtedly, academic success of a student depends on various different factors. Some people argue that a good teacher is more crucial while the others believe the attitude of the student is most important. In my opinion, an excellent teacher is a must to make a student success, than how a student thinks on his studies.
Impact of a good teacher on a student’s educational journey spans in numerous ways. Because, a good teacher can identify a child’s strengths and weaknesses and follow up them to fulfill gaps paying special attention. Moreover, mental stability is crucial even for an excellent student on continuing the performance, where a teacher can easily detect and help if a student is suffering from a personal problem that may hurt his academic activities. There are many examples where educators have illustrated success stories of well achievers just due to kind directions of a teacher who have met them in school life.
On the other hand, attitude of a student also influences on academic performance. Because, it is a student’s responsibility and willingness to follow the path that showed by a teacher. In fact, control is in student’s hand to put effort and time towards the studies. For example, while a teacher can provide extra exercises on topic that a student lags performance, unless the student practices them, the teacher may not be able to see a success. Therefore, student willingness also plays a critical role in the level of the achievement.
In overall, both a good teacher and student’s attitude almost equally contribute towards a high academic performance of a student. However, in my opinion, high attitude alone can’t make a student well achieved, while a good teacher can even make a low attitude student a success. Therefore, the presence of a good teacher is a must than the attitude of the student which can be uplifted by a good teacher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...n my opinion, an excellent teacher is a must to make a student success, than how a stud...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acher who have met them in school life. On the other hand, attitude of a student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05079365079 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94714675123 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1563954798 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.066666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366948464784 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138645296334 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756255931478 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249028547891 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103653748278 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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