Some people believe that the government should pay for and offer housing to people who lost their homes or cannot afford them. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. Use specific reasons and examples to support it.
Everyone desire for house and other necessities of life but some people are not enough lucky to afford the house for themselves and family. Question arises whether homeless people should remain be without house or government agency should take care about the accommodation requirements of citizens. I firmly believe that it is the responsibility of government to provide house to people who are unable to make.
It is general perception that every government provides different services such as health, education, transportation, pension, a place to live etc. Though all services are important for citizens, dwelling is most basic and necessary for everyone for various reasons. Firstly, house not provides the place to live but also create social surrounding required to live life peacefully. In every country, people live in group which creates the conducive environment for people and family to live life together and joyful. For example I have been living in society for last 15 years and made so many friends which helped me to enjoy the life. Secondly, people wants security in the life and having house provides the utmost security in the life. People having house do not need to move to different place and feel secure for their life.
One of the Government priorities is to help the people to meet the basic demand and provide opportunities to improve status of life. In the absence of basic necessities like food, house, cloth etc. people suffer invariably and sometimes die. For example, in African countries, people live in shady house and heavily suffer from cyclone, various diseases etc. Furthermore, owing to flood and earthquake, devastation happens sometime and people become homeless. In these circumstances, it is the tasks of the government to offer residences to people to start life.
To conclude, government job is to take care of the people in various ways and provide required facility for living the life. Housing is one of them and provides security and favorable surrounding to citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...prove status of life. In the absence of basic necessities like food, house, cloth etc. people suf...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ecessities like food, house, cloth etc. people suffer invariably and sometimes die. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18348623853 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76153731443 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507645259939 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.804653665 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240020797914 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913318436927 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540256815779 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170060952299 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586873745364 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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