Some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference.
Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?
Though age is becoming a number these days it is observable in society the crucial part it plays. The more the difference between children and parents have many benefits but also some complexity. I will discuss the major advantages and disadvantages, and evaluate my opinion and thinking in the end.
In counting the benefits, foremost will be the maturity in the parents at an older age enabling the children to receive best nurture. The Scientific American has published in its article about genetic evolutionary factors that seniority enhances the better evolution and inheritance making the off-spring more stealthier if the parents are over the 30s. The emotional balance with more difference becomes better when difference is more. In 1992, the famous Melbourne daughter of scientists created sensation in her speech for national ideology observed as the reason towards her parenting.
In looking at the disadvantages, the higher the age difference the ability of the parents to sustain their care to children becomes questionable. The risk of parents active health is high if they are older than 40 while their children being under 15. The article published on a survey conducted in California on 1000 families with higher age disparity stunned the nation with its results quoting many children faced lack of parental protection as their parents faced retirement or health issues. But that was a case in a state where there exists varied life style circumstances.
To conclude, if evaluated based on the larger beneficial cases when overlooked through a wide angle of modern day life composition, I admit that on average parents over 35 having children will outweigh the disadvantages that stem due to senile reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Though age is becoming a number these days it ...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most will be the maturity in the parents at an older age enabling the children to...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stealthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stealthier
...n and inheritance making the off-spring more stealthier if the parents are over the 30s. The em...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29241877256 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83671366916 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7333775111 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274430546927 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956918237734 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727287362642 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1578422557 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04722998394 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.