Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health. Others believe that governments should make sure that their citizens are healthy.
Leading a healthy life can be beneficial for both the people and the country. While some people believe that it is an individual responsibility to make sure that he is taking care of his health, others think that the government should also play a role regarding their citizen’s health. This essay will discuss both of these perspectives
Being healthy requires a lot of commitments from an individual. If someone performs exercises and eats good food regularly, then he will be able to keep his health in excellent shape. As people have easy access to gyms for exercise and places that sells nutrition food nowadays, it is up to them to make sure that they utilize them so that they can take care of their health. In Australia, for example, most people eat fruits and go to gyms for exercise at least 4 times a week. As a result, many people there are leading a better and healthy life there. If someone neglects his health, then it can lead to many mental and physical diseases which can harm an individual’s life.
On the other hand, the government also has some duties towards its people’s health. Although it is individual responsibility for making sure that he stays healthy, some people can not afford to eat healthily or perform exercise since they are poor. For that reason, the government should make the gyms and healthy food places affordable for everyone so that poor people will be able to take good care of their health. Furthermore, the government should also introduce healthcare which will provide benefits for people who are in need of good health.
To conclude, both individuals and governments have duties towards health to make sure that a country can build a healthy nation. Good health not only benefits people but also the governments since it will definitely keep the rates of the diseases down.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, while, at least, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91373801917 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70753908485 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485623003195 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3980212908 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377602735611 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13861033902 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14507575054 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270513961408 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122473426102 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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