Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. What do you think? What other factors contribute to happiness?
Considering the current scenerio, it is commonly believed that for enhancing mental wellness, wealth is one of the most important factor. Money is an essential part of our day to day lives. But in my opinion, one can be content without much money.
Undoubtedly, these days being rich is commonly considered as being happy, which is rather untrue. Wealth cannot create happiness from within. Emotions are much more important than money. People should be content with what they have with themselves rather than being upset over not being wealthy, because if they are satisfied with their lives then it is very easy to maintain a happy lifestyle and to grow further as well.
Furthermore, mental stability is also an essential factor in determining happiness. If a person is not in a good mental state than no amount of money and riches will make him happy. For example, is a person is clinically depressed than it is very difficult for him achieve any level of happiness in his life without getting special medical attention. That person is always going to feel miserable even if he is the richest person in the entire world. So, mental stability is crucial for being happy rather than the amount of money in the bank account. Along with the stability of mind, another factor which can influence a person's happiness is his social life. Having strong emotional bonds with family and friends can have a major impact on the level of contentment.
Conclusively, money is an essential part of life but to achieve true joy in life mental stability and strong social bonds are necessary as they can have more impact on a person's happiness than wealth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ssary as they can have more impact on a persons happiness than wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87900355872 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53268298436 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2950785574 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211499858436 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072375713837 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543845870798 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125536805177 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289083411533 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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