One of the most often challenges that modern people face is the making an option among the huge variety of proposals. I believe that in some occasions it brings the difficulties to our daily life, but the new technologies have already started to look for a solution for it.
The main reason that there are high concentration of choices is the new technologies. The Internet, smartphones, wireless connection provide us with countless number of ways to tackle one specific task, making people to puzzle about the perfect decision. The most salient example is a shopping. There are plenty of options to buy the things: online, offline, with or without delivery and other thousands of opportunities. Definitely, certain people will be exhausted by putting too much effort to a regular deal.
Moreover, the economical situation on the market forces the companies to compete with each other, making them to suggest to potential customers significantly various items . If there were a monopoly per the production sector, we would not have to choose among different brands.
In contrast, there is a belief that in the digital century everything is automatically solved by a system. It is not a secret that our devices hold the information of our using behavior, therefore when we have to make an another choice it provide us with our previous decision at the same situation before. So peoples life are eased by smart algorithms, making them to escape from choosing.
In conclusion, I concur with the statement in the question. The rapid development of IT and economy in general faced us with several problems of making the best option. However, it is already seemed to be solved by adaptive technologies which have already learned about our own preferences.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e to puzzle about the perfect decision. The most salient example is a shopping. The...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...rt to a regular deal. Moreover, the economical situation on the market forces the comp...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...al customers significantly various items . If there were a monopoly per the produc...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a choice' or 'another choice'.
Suggestion: a choice; another choice
...ehavior, therefore when we have to make an another choice it provide us with our previous decisio...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...en we have to make an another choice it provide us with our previous decision at the sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1107266436 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8808709378 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612456747405 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2072137068 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1019572215 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308853789402 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299793443057 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554959466017 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173074681499 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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