It is widely argued that in order to achieve success in sport, people have to gain physical endurance rather than mental health. I personally agree partially with the above statement. I believe that the choice of which one to follow will depend entirely on individual pursue. This essay will first make a discussion about muscular strength in sport, and then talk about how mental strength can help people gain achievement in sport.
On the one hand, the importance of physical strength variably depends on what kind of sports that people take up. Football, for example, greatly demands sporty enthusiasts to gain a strong sense of endurance and energy to play in a huge amount of time, therefore, physical strength is extremely crucial for footballers. Additionally, it is reasonably understandable that each football player, whenever they are transferred to another football club, a medical check-up is a must to ensure that they enable to give the audiences an excellent performance in every soccer match.
On the other hand, there is no room for doubt that mental health also plays an important role in sport. More specifically, sport such as chess, hugely requiring practitioners to have patience, enthusiasm, and mindful concentration, as well as practicing on a regular basis with a view to acquiring basic skills of playing chess. Therefore, people have to exert a great deal of effort to achieve mental sport. A research, which has been recently carried out by Oxford University, reveals that 89% of chess participants spend roughly 15 hours per day searching for novel techniques in order to improve their skills.
In conclusion, sport players, generally, require some essential attributes to obtain great achievements and it hugely depends on personal preferences of the role of physical and mental strength.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... football club, a medical check-up is a must to ensure that they enable to give the aud...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e role of physical and mental strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27054794521 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88983268577 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9158815563 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257743349465 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898632993214 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502895327679 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145479770612 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205222011743 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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