Some people believe that with the popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become thing of past. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that with the rapid rise in the fame of digital media, the traditional printed version is expected to become redundant in the near future. I completely agree with this notion because young generation usually prefer news on the internet and the majority of leading newspapers are available online due to environmental concerns.
In this contemporary era, the computer oriented young generation would contribute happily towards the disappearance of paper-based information. In other words, young people brought up in computer culture find it very hard to get attracted to print media because it is facile for them to google news anywhere in the world and they no longer have to wait for the next day to receive the newspaper. For instance, a survey report based on the preference of traditional and online newspapers in the Daily times states that the majority of young people prefer to read the news on their electronic gadgets.
Another reason for the popularity is due to environmental issues the majority of the leading newspapers have an active presence over the internet which clearly indicates their own natural shift towards digital media. As many of the newspaper agencies have realized the harsh reality that to protect the environment they have to say no to deforestation for the printing of newspapers. For example, The New York Times, a leading print media giant in North America has internet presence since 2003 and they stated that for their business they do not want to jeopardize the rapidly declining climate so, they led the example by taking crucial steps.
To conclude, the replacement of the newspapers by digital media is unavoidable mainly because of active young readers and to save our earth planet shift to online news is imperative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 647, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed the example by taking crucial steps. To conclude, the replacement of the news...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16151202749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75779565502 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0273724771 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.888888889 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114501956423 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506464535567 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357766575866 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726158412828 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442577842392 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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