Some people believe that range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor and rich people. Others think it is having an opposite effect.
Discuss these points of views. What is your opinion?
Although wide variety of latest technologies are creating more and more gaps between poor and wealthy individuals, However others does not believe this, in fact they they think the other way around. In my opinion, I think technologies are actually reducing the distance between the low income group and high income group.
Admittedly, there are some latest and expensive technologies are unreachable to the poorest population which eventually creates some distance between these two sides. There are instances which rich peoples are enjoying some of the benefits of the technologies which are launched recently and it is taking quiet bit of time to reach to the lower class people. This may be due to the illiteracy of the lower income group as majority of the low class peoples are not been to school. For instance, there is a new technologies has been introduced in the mobile phones called ‘NFC’ where in this is helpful in making the easy payments from our bank accounts. Since this facility is available only in the high end phones which is not affordable for poor group due to high cost.
Nevertheless, despite of above argues, I believe that the rang of technologies we have today definitely reduced the distance between poor and wealthier society groups. Across the world most of the developing nations government has taken several steps to bring the technologies to the lower low income group. There are several policies of government which would facilitate many technological advancements in the poor families. For example, in India, government has brought a policies that all the village people who are in below poorty line can open a free bank account and start using its facilities with out maintaining any balance in the account. This enables the poor people to use bank facilities like richer people.
In conclusion, Though some of them argue technologies are creating the distance between richer and poorer peoples, I strongly believe that the wide rage of technologies have in fact reduced the gaps in these peoples and it will keep reducing until all the individuals are treated as equal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
Although wide variety of latest technologies are creating more and more...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...r others does not believe this, in fact they they think the other way around. In my opini...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...stances which rich peoples are enjoying some of the benefits of the technologies which are ...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'technology'?
Suggestion: technology
...to school. For instance, there is a new technologies has been introduced in the mobile phone...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a policy' or simply 'policies'?
Suggestion: a policy; policies
...ample, in India, government has brought a policies that all the village people who are in ...
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
... account and start using its facilities with out maintaining any balance in the account....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11494252874 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75433695177 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514367816092 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4405652793 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.923076923 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270783417314 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927455928528 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622870121329 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167265844185 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026516072974 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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