Some people believe that regular exercise and diet are not necessary to live a long and healthy life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Exercise and a
balanced diet are vital components of fitness. A few people support the view
that a well maintained exercise </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">regime</span> and an <span class="hiddensuggestion">appropriate</span> diet maintained would go a long way to live long and fit
life. I <span class="hiddensuggestion">concur</span> with the view that active and diet conscious people would be
able to lead a longer and healthier life. To substantiate my above mentioned
claim with regards to exercise, which <span class="hiddengrammarerror">according to me</span> is at the helm of a long and disease free life. As of late,
all of <span class="hiddengrammarerror">a us</span> live a highly mentally stressed and to add to that even a
sedentary life style. Throughout the day we <span class="hiddensuggestion">perform</span> desk jobs be it at office and even homes are <span class="hiddensuggestion">nowadays</span> highly automated. Therefore, we don’t lead a physically
exerting life. However, at the same time we live a mentally taxing life which
makes it highly essential for us to visit a gym, a health club or even adopt
playing a sport as hobby. For example, of late the corporate lifestyle is
acknowledging the need of maintaining gyms and even yoga classes for their
staff, which has been instrumental in enhancing their performance levels. The
other reason that I would like to further mention which would depict <span class="hiddengrammarerror">the importance
of</span> a balanced diet on leading a salubrious and even a long
life. Of late due to busy life and everyone is in a rush, so they resort to
ready to eat meals, junk food and even processed food. which plays a havoc on
their intestines. for example, of late so many junk food addicts have been diagnosed
with obesity, hypertension, cholesterol, heart disease etc. and if they don't
seek remedial measures even now, then this nation will be facing a lot of
obesity related chronic diseases. <o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 14.5pt;">To sum up, I would like to reinstate my faith in regular exercise and a watched diet. In</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">todays hectic lifestyle these measures adopted would go a long way and would
further, make the world a healthier and happier place to dwell in.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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- Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a negative or positive development? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2812.0 1615.20841683 174% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.9776674938 5.12529762239 136% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.53624200978 2.80592935109 269% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.743829456 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.75 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695675197018 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354996139542 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327759601433 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323621937094 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382308201095 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 12.26 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.5 12.4159519038 189% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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