Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view. (Feb – 2018)
School learning forms an important part of a child's growing years. Many opine that school pupils should be given multiple short vacations in order to prevent students from being stressed out as well as for the periodic assessment of their knowledge. However, in my opinion, one long vacation is more beneficial for a successful and focused learning.
On the one hand, frequent vacations of small duration will reduce the academic burden on children as well as parents. In other words, with multiple vacations, the school curriculum will be completed in short phases with limited syllabus, which in turn will limit the stress of exams that majority students have to face. In addition, with short vacations it is possible to assess the knowledge of students on a timely basis. For instance, schools can conduct periodic tests before each mini vacation to test the student's knowledge of the learning for that term.
On the other hand, one long vacation after the completion of a grade will provide long-term benefits. Firstly, if the studies are conducted for an entire year without frequent breaks, children would be less distracted and be able to concentrate completely on coursework. This would allow more time for students to accustom themselves to the syllabus and develop knowledge of the subject. Secondly, vacation at the end of year will help students to keep their learning and knowledge of the coursework afresh till the end of the year. Thus, the chances of performing better in examinations and skillful academic learning will greatly increase.
To recapitulate, there has been a difference in people's opinion about the duration and the frequency of vacations provided to school students. Although multiple short vacations will reduce the academic pressure and frequently reassess the knowledge of students, I believe, a single long vacation will aid in better development of the child and prove to be an academic success for schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...s before each mini vacation to test the students knowledge of the learning for that term...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, thus, well, as for, for instance, in addition, in short, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22929936306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71776804279 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8513570004 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136917371296 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519554757978 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448488728825 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976347678521 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351915121368 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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