Some people believe that subjects such as art, music, drama and creative writing have a bright future. Therefore, schools should spend more time teaching these subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
It has always been a long-centred debatable topic amongst parents nowadays as to which subject at school would provide a better future for their children, as well as, the school should put more focus to these curriculums. Many would argue art subjects have more benefits over science subject, which personally I do not believe any subject is more in position over the other for a better career aspiration.
Successful World leaders such as America’s ex-president Barack Obama and Microsoft office’s chief executive officer Bill Gates, demonstrated a person could be successful no matter which subject they choose at school. Barack Obama studied “Law” and Bill Gates studied “Engineering” at University, which is classified as “Art” and “Science” topic respectively.
It should never be forgotten that personal capabilities are the drivers for success. A child, with an out-going charisma, may do better on management or sales works and grow to become the managing director of a company. Another youngster who loves reading books and writing could be a successful filmmaker. Characteristic of a person drives the interests and when curiosities are shown, typically a task will be easily achieved and would grow into a great achievement.
Parents, nowadays, are over-concern and undermining a path for their kids. Children should be given the exposures at an early age to different subjects and provide the opportunity to find their own interests. In addition, they should be given time to develop their skillsets that they would accomplish high achieving results. School is a place of learning and should provide equal learning opportunity for different course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, as to, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59003831418 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36806235723 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6825632957 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134382852885 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493670478868 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461418173554 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819051694939 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602754256016 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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