Some people believe that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career, others disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Parents often get in dilemma whether to engage their children in sports or not. On the one hand, team sports helps children to learn traits which bolster their career; however, some people who refute this belief say children should invest their much time on studies. This essay will discuss both views before reaching a conclusion.
Many people argue the investment of time on sports is worthless as good grades are required to develop a better career prospect. For instance, universities offer scholarships to applicants with better academic records and employers like to recruit graduates who achieve an outstanding result. Generally, good grades demand much time in their study. Thus, students involving much in their study have the possibility of developing a better future.
However, others, who claim team sports is crucial for children, say team sports teaches players essential traits such as to work in tandem with others. For example, to produce a seamless performance in a football match, each player has to play in harmony with others, has to fulfil one’s responsibility. Thus, this helps players to understand the value of hard work, co-operation, patience, devotion. This behaviour is the most for an individual to achieve the ultimate success in their career.
To sum up, although some people argue children should focus only on their studies, I believe children should be allowed to play team sports in addition to course works as team sports inculcate important traits which help an individual to pursue a shining career. Therefore, every parent should allow their children to play team sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2984496124 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61600343079 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.567810279 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312627562079 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104584367989 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07595525337 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192340780369 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08076043079 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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