Some people believe that technology has made the world a better place, while others think it has caused more problems than it has solved. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Technology has been a driving force in our lives for many years and its impact on the world has been widely debated. While some people believe that technology has made the world a better place, others think that it has caused more problems than it has solved.
On the one hand, technology has brought numerous benefits to our lives. It has made communication easier and more efficient, allowing people to connect with each other from all over the world. Technology has also made many tasks and processes more convenient and streamlined, such as online shopping, online banking, and online learning. Furthermore, technology has led to numerous advancements in medicine, making diagnoses and treatments more accurate and effective.
On the other hand, there are those who believe that technology has caused more problems than it has solved. For example, technology has contributed to a growing sense of isolation and loneliness, as people spend more time online and less time interacting with others in person. Additionally, technology has led to a decrease in physical activity and an increase in sedentary behavior, which has been linked to numerous health problems. Furthermore, technology has led to the loss of privacy and security, as personal information can be easily accessed and shared online.
In my opinion, while technology has certainly brought many benefits to our lives, it has also caused a number of problems that cannot be ignored. However, I believe that the benefits of technology far outweigh the drawbacks, and that it has made the world a better place overall. The key is to use technology in a responsible and balanced manner, so that we can continue to enjoy its benefits while minimizing its negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18439716312 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8261232256 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0549174443 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368332597611 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147304538321 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166151794874 0.0667982634062 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244695783517 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10430292238 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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