Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.
Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
It has been observed from the since that crime and punishment are two side of on coin. As we all know that every coins has tow side, here also some expert assert that all criminal has to be same punishment conflicts this other claim that all aspect have been considering while punishment. I fremly believe that government should consider all the circumstances of attempting crime. The idea that there should be comment punishment as criminal feel less guilt, oscillating this view the robbery and murder is not same crime for punishment.
There are ample reasons which confirm this fact that all criminal equipped fixed punishment. For an example, if two offender have same way to put in corner than it reducing the level of guilty feeling. In addition, criminal also get foster by the government and decline malpractice as they become wise human being.
On the flip side, there are numerous fact responsible behind this phenomenon, I will concentrate here one which is most overwhelming is criminal attempt crime with different circumstances. For an instance, history of criminal, his or her motivation behind this all this aapect are not same for all offender. Furthermore, cruelty which offered on victim is not same as in other case this factor also taken in to account while put in corner. Similarly, it lead to discrimination if all criminal put on fixed punishment, which is some how increase malpractice.
To conclude, this perspective providing same punishment for all crime, Criminal may be encourage and diminish the ratio of crime. On the other hand, I advocate that murder and theft cannot attend crime in same manner as punishment should be different. I recommended that all aspect should be taken into consideration while punishing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, while, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10069444444 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8198185815 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7284656518 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290359996549 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117231063026 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810413494467 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195153025915 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116820606997 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.