Nowadays, Many people think about using internet for free.On the other hand,other persons also expect that payment system should be included to access for the internet.But, there are advantages and disadvantages for these two opinions.
First of all, if people can operate internet at large, they can utilize their times on useful working.Many people has economical problems for which they won't be able to compete with the digital generation because with internet disconnected they also get disconnected from the modern world.But,there is also unbeneficial things using free internet.People's mind also wants to divert themselves for bad working like cyber bullying, phishing, hacking etc.These types of delinquent effort they will try to accomplish.
secondy, if payment system is involved then the criminalism discussed above will be minimised.But as every things such as for television, sports, transport,medicine,education we have to pay, alongside with these payment should be included for operating internet.Free system of using internet can cause many troubles like poverty, starvation etc and as a human being we should avoid expecting such things.
In conclusion, mankind is evolving with the developement of scince as well as communication and these things can only be possible with internet.Internet cost can be minimised but from my view it will not be quite a good solution.If internet is accessable for free, government will have to compensate and this will create problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62831858407 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46250741974 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.870935502 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.0 106.682146367 298% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310567331458 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208762514335 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072347566504 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208762514335 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072347566504 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.3 13.0946893788 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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