The chart depicts that the drinking and buying habits of coffee and tea was different in last 4 weeks in five australian cities. In below, the comparison of this states will be described.
In Brisbane and adelaide the percentage of buying and drinking fresh coffee in last 4 weeks was same. On the other hand, this was not alike in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobar. Though, the percentage of this cities are high around 39%-43%.
If we take into account of instant coffee then we can see the amount is larger than fresh coffeee in the areas of australia. Besides, people went to a cafe for coffee or tea more than buying coffee in the cities. Interestingly, in Adelaide it is like 50% for both instant cofee and the cafe, which is around same.
From the information of above, it is clear that people's in australia are likely to go to a cafe for coffee or tea than buying fresh as well as instant coffee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t alike in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobar. Though, the percentage of this cities are high...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...ne and Hobar. Though, the percentage of this cities are high around 39%-43%. If w...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...this cities are high around 39%-43%. If we take into account of instant coffee ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53658536585 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39509214626 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.700371926 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215873839021 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914533334669 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858435751937 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145414649983 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819175813832 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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