Some people claim that family members are more important than friends. Do you agree or disagree?
It is indeed true that family and friends are play vital role in individual`s life. A group of people perceive that family comes first instead of friends. I completely agree with this notion. My inclination is justified and explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
The foremost argument to justify my view point is that family is always support in every stage of life. To begin with, a person need good education and for this, family provides financial help. Also, parents have selfless love towards their children. Whenever any difficult situation occur, family gives assistance and direction which is helpful for person. For example, a survey has shown that when people suffer from any health condition, only parents can take care without the expectation and spend their all money to heal the recovery.
Furthermore, only parents wish for their child to reach at height of success. There are so many examples that family sell property which they have only for children`s career. In addition, the way of nurturing is the best way for infants and no one can do this. They want to give the best for their child.
On the other hand, friends are our backbone. People can share every situation with them, which they cannot able to tell their family. For example, academic problems, students can share their issues about studies and friends always give a solution. A study has shown that people feel lonely without friends. So, to reduce anxiety, It is doctor`s advice to make friends and involve in group.
To conclude, it can be stated that parents are our base of life and they can be our priority in our all phase of life. On the other hand, friends are important because they are companion in our every activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'many examples'.
Suggestion: many examples
...each at height of success. There are so many example that family sell property which they ha...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...reer. In addition, the way of nurturing is best way for infants and no one can do this....
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...way for infants and no one can do this. they want to give best for their child. O...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...e other hand, friends are our backbone. people can share every situation with them, wh...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A study' or simply 'studies'?
Suggestion: A study; Studies
...ies and friends always give a solution. A studies have shown that people feel lonely with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96896551724 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52630630435 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8980798795 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.05 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126434442328 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423666472221 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325778979095 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760102497419 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039917045845 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.