Nowadays, the standard of living is increasing day by day. Hence, the needs for the human purchase also follow that to rise. From this trend, many ideas have been born. Having some people think that the cost of the product which they want to buy is the most important. However, others consider that the price is the one should pay attention but not at all. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the second point. In this essay will discuss the two views mentioned above in depth.
To begin with, the first view seems that is not justified. The general trends of consumers are wanted to buy the product with the good quality but the price must not be expensive. Therefore, the enterprises trying to find out the news goods with the low price and they don't focus much on the sustainability of products. Take Vietnamese people as an individual example of this trend. The consumer market in Vietnam would be attractive with the low ware value first. There is a weak point make Vietnamese become easily a victim of the crooks who just care about the money and create the products that not only have a low life expectancy but also affect the consumer's health.
As regards the second view, it seems that much more convincing. Like the master of fact, the high-quality products will have the sustainable value of their quality. There would not have cases like cheap will go with good. In my opinion, not at all but will more exist the price will decide the goods' quality. For example, Apple company is the famous brand now, they always have a large number of consumers and they are continuing to expand the market. So the main reason for making the customers always looking for them despite the high price because of their goods' quality. There are may meet the demands of consumers.
To sum up, cheap product obviously brings us many benefits as well ass several problems. However, the goods with the quite price highly but have a good quality is undoubtely a good options. The importand thing also is the things you want to buy whatever reason if it is provide what you need fully and you like it that is always the best choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... news goods with the low price and they dont focus much on the sustainability of pro...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...low life expectancy but also affect the consumers health. As regards the second view, ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... the famous brand now, they always have a large number of consumers and they are continuing to ex...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...ou want to buy whatever reason if it is provide what you need fully and you like it tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, as regards, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62005277045 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27281102797 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54617414248 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0248977333 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1304347826 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138819583688 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368984829489 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526032052355 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093762087088 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450066931978 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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