Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as a cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
There are many who treat the cost of an item as a deciding factor while purchasing it and seek for the cheapest service available in the market. However, in my opinion, while I believe that a person should be careful when spending the money, I also agree that one should prioritize better quality of service in some matters rather than price, such as in medical treatment, health, and food.
On the one hand, in the present time, when financial pressure has surged substantially compared to the past, people need to be more careful while spending their money because spending recklessly leads to financial crisis and untoward situations. That is to say, the folks, generally, have a limited budget to spend, especially the salaried people. Such people must consider the price of an item before purchasing it so that they do not run out of money after buying unnecessarily costly items when a comparatively cheaper item could also serve the purpose. Take, for example, before opting to buy an iPhone, which is very costly, one must check if his budget allows him to spend hefty amount and should contemplate cheaper alternatives that can serve the same purpose.
On the other hand, there are a few matters where one should not worry about cost and must not compromise on the quality of service. For instance, while getting medical treatment, a person should seek for the best possible medical service because it is vital to his life. Similarly, one should always buy good quality food despite that it is invariably expensive because cheaper food has adverse effects on health, and health is the irreplaceable treasure of life.
In conclusion, one must prioritize quality or price depending upon the case, as in some cases a person should choose the best possible quality and in others, a person might need to consider the price.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95792880259 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55720365624 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527508090615 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.619428808 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.2 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169766317933 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655358670008 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577680460254 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106253845847 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304005839708 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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