Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying products (such as cell phones) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion asserting that it is only the price of goods and services that is of paramount importance when purchasing them. I, for one, disagree with the given statement on the basis of some compelling reasons.
To begin with, I think the quality is much more important. First and foremost, whether people are aware of it or not, they are constantly spending their money on various items. Here, they would unconsciously opt for the cheaper product, or whatever they are spending their money on, just because to save some cash. However, they are forgetting the fact that the durability or the quality of the item being bought would not be long-lasting or satisfactory, and in turn, they will inevitably have to allocate more budget to cover them in the near future. That being said, it would be a much more wise decision if one purchases a fewer number of products, such as clothes or gadgets, and instead focus on the high quality of them rather than quantity.
Admittedly, I totally understand there exist so many people who cannot afford expensive products. Therefore, they would be left with no alternative to choose less expensive materials or services. I think, however, even less privileged people of society are able to save money. In this way, they can readily raise savings for buying higher quality goods, irrespective of their fees. Other factors also contribute to more purchasing satisfaction. Things such as delivery time, the amount of guarantee, or the quality of the given service to customers or patients are salient illustrations in this respect.
In conclusion, owing to the fact that the fee of what we buy is a challenging factor for many individuals of societies, I still believe that it is not the most important item when it comes to shopping. Spending more to receive better service seems to be more logical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72613064565 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9146062591 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142951312521 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482786589851 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040041208291 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100549335146 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401601682554 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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