Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.
Some people prefer to admit their children in boarding schools, while others believe that day schools are the better choice for children to study. I consider that studying in boarding schools create psychological disturbance among children.
Those people who consider boarding schools to be a better place to study cite its various benefits. One key benefit they say is focused learning. While staying at school the pupils follow a schedule and hence they do not waste time in useless activities such as playing video games, watching television and using mobile phones. They can focus on their work and attain remarkable results. Another reason is character development that children learn to become a responsible and respectable citizen. They learn to follow discipline which creates a positive image in society.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that boarding schools are not in the favor of child’s mental growth. A child who is only exposed to a limited place and same environment for long period of time will face serious mental problems in future. It will lead to stress and hence happiness will not come closer to them. They do not get awareness of the outside world and it becomes difficult for them to socialize. Moreover, they stay away from their parents which results in loss of parent’s love and affection. By staying away from parents, they will forget about their obligations and will not be able to fulfill them.
In conclusion, it seems advisable not to admit children in boarding schools. It is better for them to live with their parents and study in day schools to avoid stressful and miserable life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ted place and same environment for long period of time will face serious mental problems in fu...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... time will face serious mental problems in future. It will lead to stress and hence happi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05147058824 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54805670916 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8916307744 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225440335905 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716191142045 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791814996201 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162962533067 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928442071218 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.