Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
-give advice on how you and your friends and family use the centre.
-explain why the centre is important for the local community
-describe the possible effects on local people of the centre closes.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am resident of P Block, Model Town. The leisure centre built near the central park is 500 meters from my destination. Me and my friends visit that centre quite often. After a tiring day at work these places help us refresh ourself.
Sports play an important role in everyone life. A health person can enjoy far better than an unhealthy one. To remain fit you have to do some exercise daily. In leisure centre there are a lot of facilities for different kind of sports like tennis, badminton and table tennis.
I know running such centers is not easy and ofcourse it has money expensis. Council is now considering to close this club which will create a lot of problems for local people. People go there to fresh themselve and have some healthy activity but with its closure there will be no place where someone can perform healthy activities.
I am requesting on behalf to not shut it down.
Yours sincerely
Almaida
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... friends visit that centre quite often. After a tiring day at work these places help ...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering closing'.
Suggestion: considering closing
...e it has money expensis. Council is now considering to close this club which will create a lot of pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40510629117 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.775757575758 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8688734935 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4615384615 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6923076923 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191171888504 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546923801336 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550476200358 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703605009258 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411693166683 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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