Some people prefer to get advice from doctors while others prefer internet for medical recommendations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People for their health queries rely on doctors whereas others consider internet as a source. In my perspective, both doctors and internet can facilitate the medical needs of individuals. However, doctors are certified healthcare professionals can operate with due diligence and can provide accurate medical care, besides the credibility of internet can be questioned in par with medical recommendations.
On the one hand, individuals seek advice on health care from doctors which is often validated because they perform physical examination and after considering all the conclusive evidence they provide care. In addition, they often operate via sophisticated medical facilities which have state of the art equipment and peer review programs, where the care given is reviewed by their peers/fellow doctors to check the accuracy of the care provided. To illustrate, a recent survey was conducted by administrative healthcare department of California, people have reported that they often rely on doctors for their medical needs and recommendations because of the physical interaction. They also have stated that it’s mentally more comforting to see a doctor when it comes to their health.
On the other hand, information and practices regarding healthcare on internet cannot be viable and validated. Firstly, there is often a wide array of information on the internet which is not subjective and conclusive. For example, there are experimental procedures about how to cure tuberculosis with herbs, which is not tested and can be lethal if practiced by individuals suffering from that disease. Secondly, for medication recommendations, the internet promotes the use and sale of different drugs which are not approved by government agencies and can be harmful for individuals. For instance, I personally was a victim of taking unauthorized medication. I had followed a website which recommended vitamin tablets after taking those I had fallen sick and had to contact a doctor for my recovery. However, internet can be helpful in providing individuals with easy health remedies which are obvious like fever, flu and cold but for major health advice and conditions it’s always effective to consult a doctor.
In conclusion, health is an important factor in any individual’s lifestyle. Internet can be effective at a certain level and widely there can be a lot of untrusted information. However, healthcare professionals are well qualified to advice and perform legitimate treatments. On the whole, in my opinion, it’s always better to see a doctor when it’s about your health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53634085213 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18665346946 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8192933674 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.722222222 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20601929816 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719356491934 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479503129646 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132617429594 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519997954001 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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