Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the preference on change. While some people argue that, the disadvantages of change overweigh the advantages, on my point of view I strongly disagree with that argument. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in strengthening my argument while analysing the both sides to a greater extent.
First and foremost, both the society and individuals can gain myriad of benefits through change. We can improve the work processes in our work place by adding few changes to it. For example, we can promote email usage inside office to mitigate the use of papers, which would decrease the cost on papers while improving the quality of communication. In addition to that changes sometimes end up with valuable innovations to the mankind. Therefore, organizations would encourage people who suggest for changes.
On the other hand, some disadvantages can be experienced in some situation when changes are introduced to a certain process. People may show their reluctance towards the change because they are not aware on the exact motive of changing the process. At the same time, people who prefer doing the same thing over again will be stressed over the period of time and it will adversely effect on both his mental fitness together with physical fitness. However, those who take high risk are rewarded with high rewards in the long run, though it gives loses in the short run.
In conclusion, changers have to be introduced in a well-planned manner, in order to mitigate the resistance from the other people. It is also believed that, parents need to encourage their children’s views on change, because that could be a major factor for his future success. In nutshell, sometimes changers can make loses, but the experience we learnt can be useful in future since failures are considered to be the pillars of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...he period of time and it will adversely effect on both his mental fitness together wit...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a well-planned manner" with adverb for "well-planned"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...clusion, changers have to be introduced in a well-planned manner, in order to mitigate the resistance fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05111821086 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75865597945 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1792659696 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19335478291 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574670461466 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433218224273 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106755945101 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646819262092 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.