Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether advertising encourages us to buy unnecessary things or it helps us to discover the things that are new in the market. I agree that it helps to discover new innovations that might make our lives easier.
Advertisements impart knowledge about new innovations in technology. Customers like me who are living in rural areas are mostly unaware about the advancements in latest technology. Television adverts and radio announcements broadens our horizons about the new products in the market. For instance, an advertisement about antioxidant properties of green tea was shown on television that not only helped my grandmother to get rid of gastritis but also helped her to remain more active after using it.
Another benefit is this that advertisements about certain products can save time and effort and even makes our lives easier. Products such as automatic washing machines, food processor, mixer grinder, bread maker, and dish washer were introduced in the market in early 19th century. However, most people became aware about the usability of such products only after watching the practical use of these things from advertisements.
On the contrary, some people believe that commercials often trap the customers in buying things that they really do not need. However, I believe that impulse buying happens even when we visit shopping malls and advertisements cannot be solely blamed for this. The advantages of marketing outweigh the disadvantages. Moreover, it gives a platform for new businesses to showcase their products in market.
In conclusion, I reiterate that TV commercials and radio announcements are helping us to discover new products available in the market. The decision to buy the product should be made after proper research by the customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
...e mostly unaware about the advancements in latest technology. Television adverts and radi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36713286713 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.996177084 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8108917924 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294138168919 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958723488041 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597505788386 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160215360194 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535312793534 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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