Advertisement is considered as key to increase sales by a number of people. While, some believe that nowadays, people ignore advertisement as it is everywhere. In my opinion, advertisement play a key role in sales even though people seem to avoid it.
Almost all businesses have been using various form of advertisement to reach their customers. There has been a lots of evidence that suggests that advertisement has a positive outcome on sales. Advertising certain products on different Medias allows the target audience of the business to know about its existence. Reaching the possible customers and letting them know about the product and its benefits increases the chance of the customers buying the product. In addition to this, a study conducted in Korea suggested that, if the advertisement is entertaining and informative, more customers will tends to try that product which ultimately increases the sales even though the product is below satisfactory in quality.
Lately, there has been a massive increase in the trend of advertisement as the economy is growing along with availability of many advertisement platform. Some people suggest that advertisement is old fashion and nobody cares about it. This impression must be because people these day tend to skip advertisement whenever possible. Also, there are a number of advertisement that sell similar products which functions the same, making the customers confused and annoyed.
But, I believe that advertisement play a very important role in business. It acts as a medium to connect with the possible customers. However, sales does not only rely on advertisement. Customers are much more aware these days so business should also focus on quality alongside with advertisement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...o reach their customers. There has been a lots of evidence that suggests that advertis...
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Line 2, column 600, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'tend'
Suggestion: tend
...ng and informative, more customers will tends to try that product which ultimately in...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
... This impression must be because people these day tend to skip advertisement whenever pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37226277372 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11445407386 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1921609289 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194186856336 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729994821828 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532389153934 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132615655179 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660629002164 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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