some people say that in all levels of education from primary school to universities too much attention is paid on learning facts not enough on learning the practical skills. do you agree or disagree?
Surviving in this modern era is a herculean task and requires many tools to survive one of the most imminent is “education”, however, few people believe that present education system is more about learning theory since the primary school to universities. Therefore, as a result, students are rendered with no skills to face the world except the theories, likewise I had experienced similar dilemma at my first job thus I agree with it. Hence, jotting down my point of view in the following paragraphs.
The current education system is laden with a humungous amount of facts and figures, with little or no practical knowledge. For instance, when I started my first job, the four years of my university seems futile, my work seems alien to me although I knew about it but couldn’t replicate it in practical life and consequently my first job turned out to be my university instead of my workspace. Additionally, the current force lack ability to create and dream instead they become a mere tool to fulfill others vision.
Therefore, it is not a startling fact that most of the dreamers, entrepreneurs, billionaires, and inventors are college dropouts one such example is Steve jobs founder of the billion-dollar company apple who once mentioned this disadvantage of the education system. One of the fundamental drawbacks of this education system is it suppresses the creative thinking of a person which further results in choking a budding scientist, resulting in augmenting the workforce of human robots.
In conclusion, the present education system is responsible for throttling many brilliant minds because of an improper amalgamation of facts and their application in real time. Thus there is an ineluctable need to revise our education model.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... most imminent is 'education', however, few people believe that present...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...cts and their application in real time. Thus there is an ineluctable need to revise ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21830985915 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17657158308 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0453154376 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.2 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115932034385 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412137375664 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374296391719 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656416963315 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240314309028 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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