It is believed that one of many ways to improve your life expectancy is keeping your body stay healthy. Simple activity that can maintain your healthiness is doing a routine sport, such us running and basketball, though, many people still not aware of this. Busy schedule is one of the reason people did not have enough time to do an excersise consistenly. To increase the awareness, there is a thought to add plenty of sport facilities to encourage people to go in for sport. In a result, there are pros and contras toward this opinion.
Those who agree that by increasing sport facilities, people will be motivated to do an excersise. Something new can boosted up someone’s mood to do thing that they never tried, this may works for sport facilities. Maybe you have experienced, when you bought something new, such us new running shoes, you tended to be more frequent to run if compared to before you bought it.
Contrast to the others who disagree about this opinion. health is not just about doing sport every single time. There are so many ways to improve public health without interfering physical activity. If we only do sport but did not have an adequate lifestyle, then it will be useless. For example, nowadays, fast food restaurant is salable because the customer thought the food is more cheap and faster to get. Nutritious food is often forgotten especially when we are too busy to cook our own meal. Moreover, sleep patterns highly affect our healthiness. As a human, sleep is very important as we need to have a rest after spending your energy through the day.
In my opinion, rising sport facilities may trigger society to do more physical activity for some people, but the others will be doing it when they are genuinely wanted to do it, not because they are equipped with some new facilities.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 61
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...others who disagree about this opinion. health is not just about doing sport every sin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79365079365 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57963808079 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2319304103 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186116736963 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624403106919 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517686300017 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108355635015 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028865943242 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.