Food production is one of the vital things that the government always needs to keep an eye on. When it comes to its source, there are two ways to either produce all the food locally or import from other countries. To a certain extend, local production surpasses import because of the economic boost; however, there are several benefits of food import which cannot be ignored.
Producing food within a nation carries more weight than importing from other countries because it can have enough food and no dependency on other nations. Coming to the first advantage, if the edible items are produced locally, people get enough food not only in enough quantity but also at a reasonable price. For example, the USA lacks the local production of wheat, resulting in a shortage of it frequently. Another benefit relates to the boost of the economy. For example, if a country has sugar production locally, it keeps the rates of it under control, and it results in a better state of the economy.
On the other side, the option of importing food has its pros. If a country imports food that is not available locally, it improves those two nations' trade relations. If the USA, for example, imports wheat from India, India, in return, will import food not available locally. Another significant importance of import is, any country cannot produce all the needed edible items locally because of the lack of natural resources.
After looking into both views, the local production option overweights the second choice because of the improvement of the economy and self-dependency. Be that as it may, because of some compulsions, import of food cannot be removed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: extent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96389891697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61129891805 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2961233924 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263188096869 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10162662499 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629253156549 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171867945272 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452338168873 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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