Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The economic condition of one country varies from another. Some individuals are of the opinion that the raise in an economy is essential to decrease the poverty in the globe. However, some people think that economic development ought be stopped immediately to prevent the environmental damages. In my opinion, economic development is necessary to reduce and eradicate poverty in the world.
On the one hand, economic growth helps the government to invest in different developmental projects in the country. As a result, there will be ample of employment opportunities. Hence, the poverty due to unemployment will be reduced to a great extent. For example, due healthy economic condition, the authorities will invest their money in developmental activities such as building new bridges, hospitals, and roads. Thus, it creates lot of jobs for the people. Therefore, the citizens can earn their livelihood ad eradicate poverty.
On the other hand, economic growth results in people leading a lavish life. They tend to build towers, industries, and factories. Hence, many trees are destroyed in order to build industries and buildings. Therefore, the environment gets impacted and the pollution increases considerably. For instance, many farmlands and forest areas are cleared in order to construct roads and industries. As a result, there is an increase in the global warming. Therefore, it is required to halt the economic development in order to freeze the authorities from developmental activities.
To conclude, people may differ their opinions about economic growth. However, economic development helps to improve the financial condition of the people and hereby enhances their standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: OUGHT_SAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ought to be'?
Suggestion: ought to be
... people think that economic development ought be stopped immediately to prevent the envi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54789272031 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0483014818 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2545619939 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2105263158 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30414543325 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873566733276 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101689881422 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193568560241 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126629944739 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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