Some people say that everyone can make art (eg.painting, music, poetry), others believe that it can only be made by those withspecial ability. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
One group of population consider that creation of artworks is obtainable only for those who has a talent, while there are also thosewho assume that anybody is capable of doing it. In this essay, I will discuss bothsides of the argument and then I will give my own opinion.
On the one side of the argument are individuals whosuppose that specific gift is necessary for artcreation. This group of people may support their point of you by the fact that extraordinarypeople create remarkable works of art, which is one of a kind. For instance, onlyMichelangelo was able to depict spectacular fresco paintings on the ceiling of CapellaSistina. Thus, it is obvious that in order to create something similar a personshould be born with this kind of talent. Almost every famous painter or musician had exceptional abilities in their field.
On the other side, it is possible to make an oppositecase. There are cases in history when somebody wanted to learn art hardly enough;they were able to achieve professional level of their performance as a result. Toillustrate, there is a young man in Ukraine, who having disability to learn despiteon this fact managed to finish musical school and even was invited to performin a stage of Philharmonic Hall. Therefore, inorder to learn something including process of art creation a person should be motivated,pen-minded and eager to learn new things such as techniquesof drawing or types of poems and laws of the genre.
As far as I am concern, I support the idea thateveryone can be an artist, if he wants to be it. There is saying that hard workbeats talent, when talent does not work hard. This means that behind of any artcreation are hours and hours of work and each person is capable in case ofenough effort to make it.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have theirmerits. On balance, however I believe that each and every can enjoy of theprocess of art creation weather they have talent or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pen-minded
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91540785498 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05644337341 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586102719033 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6610498645 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169057163259 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475984242928 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034163988109 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854501001553 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020734076463 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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