Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is argue that parents can effectively plan leisure activities for children, while others claim that it is freely for children to choose their leisure pursuits. From my point of view, both approaches play a significant role for the development of children.
There are obvious reasons why people might believe that children should have the choice for opting their spare time activities. Firstly, each child has their own unique characteristics, so they are enable to select their fields of interest or choose what to do of their own volition to be suitable for their strengths. For instance, those who are sociable and active may opt for sporting activities such as basketball or football. Doing physical recreation will be the best way for children to enhance their stamina and agility. Moreover, if students are interested in reading, drawing or playing musical instrument, it is benefical for them in increasing in confience, creativity and being an effective stress-reliever.
On the other hand, I support the view that recreational activities for children should be designed by their parents. This is because parents have abilities to support their children to find out the most effective and healthy activities to fit their capacity and avoid them from negative leisure pursuits. Playing on phones or watching TV all day as an example of disadvantage recreation for kids. Besides, if children are keen on doing spare time activities and just do whatever they like, they will become overindulged children and can neglect their study. Hence, children need parental intervention to organize their activities, remind and guide what the best for them to pursue.
All in all, it seems to me both the choice freely chosen recreational activities by children and being organized by parents has a significant role in children's development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
It is argue that parents can effectively plan leisu...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...own unique characteristics, so they are enable to select their fields of interest or c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28231292517 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9089667506 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.551009991 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379019741744 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151045261828 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718248994205 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247945423996 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047172056361 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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