Some people say History is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Different levels of importance for learning History versus Technology and Science have become a frequent topics of discussion lately. While I accept that historical information could be beneficial, I believe that in today’s lifestyle, knowing science and technology is the key to improve.
On the one hand, there are clear advantages for study History. Providing cultural awareness is one of the achievements which helps nations to communicate wisely and being conscious of their similarities and contrast. This source of information could be useful in marketing, tourist industry or even when there is conflict between countries. In addition, History helps us learn from our mistakes and avoid repeating them and tackle today’s issue. Knowing how a kingdom vanished or a country have evolved lead us to a better understanding of our world.
On the other hand, it can be argued that study Science and Technology is more important. In the world of gadgets and space shuttles without sufficient knowledge we would be dependent not only for basic needs also for crucial items such as medicine, nutrition and scientific equipment which is happening in developing countries. Moreover, job opportunities in the field of technology is widely available in comparison with history.
I personally think that devote more time and afford to Science and Tech could make life easier even for searching any historical events. Just by click a button there are sources of information about specific time in the past with all details. Also, movies and podcasts which are a sign of technology, makes studying boring subjects such as history fun.
In conclusion, I agree that knowing History could be useful, but Science and Technology need more consideration because humans’ life has changed and they are surrounded by technological advances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'topic'?
Suggestion: topic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43402777778 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98564070907 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.225823558 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183162145988 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622823780133 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463661684542 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10504616019 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387542810242 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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