Although parents are responsible for raising a child, outside influences play a key role in their development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.
The effects of world out of family borders to growth of an infant have been discussed lately. I strongly believe that achievement inside the family has crucial effect so the brighter it is, the less would be outside influences.
The opening chapter of everyone’s lifespan begins inside family and fundamental personal development would form at this stage. Character, personality and beliefs basically come from family and could build up a strong step to jump towards vivid and shiny future and adolescent. That is to say, if a child has stable upbringing and be surrounded by parents’ love and attention, he would definitely learn sacrifice and know the meaning of support and commitment which could lead him act as someone who inspired others.
Furthermore, cultivating useful skill are included in parental duties. As long as these heavy burdens execute with high standards, the safety of our offspring is guaranteed. Consider moral values, the ability to distinguish between wrong and right, accepting or rejecting requests and also being someone who is decisive, all are attitudes that could be acquired through pure relation among family members. For example, when a child has dilemma to choose, he has learnt which factors are essential to count and obviously his parents are always ready to give a hint or show their presence instead of blaming.
Some people may argue that as children spend adequate time among peer groups or even teacher and generally society, they would be more affected by them than their parent. However, mothers and fathers could act as a friend to their child, being an intimate friend that children share their thoughts with them eagerly, ask for their help. In that way, the impression of outside the family would be less and under the control of parent.
In conclusion, I think parent’s duty is not just raising a child but the quality of it has a much more value because children would reflect their family and whatever they thought them just like a mirror to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ght them just like a mirror to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08108108108 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6384385068 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3549587293 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.153846154 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128623828647 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451079011598 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389000294091 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695005175015 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377224057466 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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