Some people believe that history is one of the chief subject in school. Other argue that science and technology is most valuable asset of life in nowdays. The following paragraph elucidate both the views along with my opinion.
To begin with, there is no denying fact that history helps young people to Understed cultural values, religious sentiments and essence of festivales in which young people are lacking . Meanwhile, it will give sense of belongingness to youngesters . To exemplify , In india some of the history books in 10th standard of cbse board depicts the information about holy festivals and provide core of Hinduism which can only find out among these books . Moreover, history has limited amount of resources and materials which can help students to understand the most part of history and people can easily mangae to take a job after studying history subject .
However, science and technology is Key of contemporary world it Enhanced the student's knowledge skills and provide them better platform to communicate and accellerate their skills of career development. To typify, Survey conducted by Harward University reveals that 30% of students get their job after completing Secondary eduation in technology feild because of the interest of children's in computer as well as among internet also. Furthermore new students want skills in which they can grasp knowledge and put it in career . In this case outcome of skills is unmanageable they make huge money from them in whole life.
In my opinion, history is only for some people who wants to know their forefarters lifestyle. I can match my prespective with second views which can give student's better way to express themselves. Additionally, science and Technology is more weightage than history
In conclusion , essay illustrates that history is no longer chief subject among recent world while, science and technology has viewed as the most important outcome for most families and modern education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31210191083 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7580317375 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0149717564 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349578952278 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11392769986 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110509368039 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212144983752 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102831074446 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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