According to some people sporting events held in their countries will not be beneficial rather devastating, while others disagree point that there are more advantages than disadvantages. Personally, i am in accordance with the second statement, however, this essay will consider both points of view.
On the one hand, large sporting events require to spend a lot of money on them, which might be spent on education or medicine. For example, World nomad games held by Kyrgyzstan was the largest spending throughout the whole period of a country exist. Back to that year, of 2018, the government had allocated the whole budget on military forces and secure for tourists from all over the world. The next portion of the budget was spent on entertainment activities for guests from another country whilst our schools should have been rebuilt. Moreover, it could be stressful in some ways for the parliament and for the nation, because of an increasing amount of terrorist attacks and also it is important to leave a great impression by the event for the tourists of a host country, respectively.
On the other hand, World nomad games made prove so many people of their country as same as other different sports events. Eventually, it financially faced the efforts of the government and some individuals because of tourists have boosted their budgets by providing them rooms. Owing to this, our roads had been rebuilt due to this event.
Overall, sporting events can be more beneficial than devastating. They are increasingly popular and for the host countries, it is a chance to show themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...antages than disadvantages. Personally, i am in accordance with the second statem...
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Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...one hand, large sporting events require to spend a lot of money on them, which might be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07224334601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76489393904 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0174275184 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111777300286 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414884160694 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564310966761 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773957970257 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496169028575 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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