Some parents are afraid of their children as advertisements usually downplay the content. According to advertisers content is just providing the information and wants people to get to know the best product for consumption. I somewhat agree with the first statement; however, the reason for children’s current state could not be wholly the blame of advertisers. This essay will give explanations in the upcoming paragraphs.
Technology and the modernized era had become one of the most paramount part of our life. Children are obsessed with the hi-tech culture and advertisements are affecting their mindset as well. The fear of parents is clearly obvious. There are thousands of options for everything as same as advertisements for them. Companies in a pathway to make their products the best one for the consumers, downplay some disadvantages. If advertisements start to reveal every secret, nobody will purchase anything. Although advertisements have an adverse effect on humanity such as being cheated in some ways, claiming about they are misleading is not a germane question.
As an example Chinese plasters, which was introduced on TV. They are really good and effective for injures. I have used them for 2 years. Most of the advertisements are really true. There is an important advantage of advertisement is to be aware. As was mentioned before, a competition that exist among companies can lead to the production of better products. Moreover, people are able to choose and compare, that is why managers lead to be more specific about the quality.
In a nutshell, an advertisement is a form of media. Misleadful stuff for children could be the internet. Parents are proposed to interact with children more and being aware of what they do to not cause such issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09494030288 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0219238106 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1428571429 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61904761905 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342254011387 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931398151108 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663089937249 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20723461782 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516013760939 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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