Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern world, thanks to inventions of internet and technology information accessibility has dramatically changed. Although many people believe that in 21th century people are surrounded by extra and useless information, I cannot agree with them that it is a problematic issue. I have various reasons for this choice, among them accessibility to different and comparative source of knowledge and saving time, energy and materials are the conspicuous ones.
The first aspect to point out is that nowadays when an individual needs to know about a topic, they immediately use the internet and search motor engines, so in few seconds there are millions of pages of information about that topic. Comparing to the time prior to invention and widespread usage of internet that people must find their required information from big encyclopedia or books, and needless to say those books were not available everywhere, in these days finding needed information is much easier. For instance, when a woman in previous generation wanted to cook a meal, she needs to learn it from her mother or relatives or rarely find a recipe book; however, in today's world, thanks to the internet it just take a minuet to find the best way to cook a meal even an abroad food.
Secondly, time, materials and energy saving while finding required information are another factor that must be taken into consideration. Now, most of publications offer their books or journals through their websites, which provides the readers this opportunity to access their information from all over the world. Take the situation that a student needs to search about a scientific subject 50 years ago. He had to go to his university libraries and check the available journals one by one. many problem such as unavailability of journals in the library, wasting time, using materials for creating and transporting the books to other places cause not to finding up-to-date information.
In sum not only do internet and search motor engines offer people invaluable information that help them to compare and choose among them, but they also helps our world to save resources and peoples' time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: MINUETS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'minute'?
Suggestion: minute
..., thanks to the internet it just take a minuet to find the best way to cook a meal eve...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the publications') or simply say ''most publications''.
Suggestion: most of the publications; most publications
... must be taken into consideration. Now, most of publications offer their books or journals through t...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...heck the available journals one by one. many problem such as unavailability of journ...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...heck the available journals one by one. many problem such as unavailability of journals in t...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...re and choose among them, but they also helps our world to save resources and peoples...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83077691795 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591428571429 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9046646062 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.75 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197310729189 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674465601717 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558234609477 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122497361048 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424666575728 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.