Some people say that it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized in the correct place.
Do you agree or disagree….
It is undeniable that cleanliness is half of the faith and many people advocate that it is vital to keep everything in their correct order. Moreover, house and offices should be thoroughly cleaned. I completely agree with the statement that neat places have behavioral impact on a person’s life, whereas these areas are easy to operate.
Firstly, clean and tidy surrounding create positivity among people. In other words, people working in clean environment are more motivated and enthusiastic as compared to living in messed up areas. For instance, in 2018 a psychological study was conducted in New Zealand among two group of people one was from well-organized places and other from untidy areas, when results were compared it depict that untidy group were pessimist while other group were more goal oriented. Furthermore, people living and working in filth free areas are happier, satisfied and contented.
Secondly, tidy areas are more appealing to eyes and much easier to do daily chores whether its home or job place because when everything is found in order then it will be less time consuming as much time is wasted in searching for required things. For example, in a wardrobe there are sections for belongings when each item is placed in the designated section then it can be collected with in no time. In addition to that it saves much of precious time which can be spend on other activities.
In conclusion, people may vary in their opinions I believe that tidiness and cleanliness is the utmost thing in life as it bring positivity in people and is extremely convenient to spend valuable time in such places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01838235294 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7363983184 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7012937913 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.090909091 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7272727273 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136723966146 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465743195315 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406512003941 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797497852791 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391828906335 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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