Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern society, clothes and appearance are used quite often to judge and form a perception about a person. For example, a person wearing shabby
clothes may be perceived to be uncultured whereas a person wearing expensive clothes may be perceived to be refined and well mannered. However, I believe
that looks can often be deceiving and should not be solely relied upon while trying to infer a person's culture or character.
To begin with, if clothes were really an indicator of a person's culture, they why do we see a lot of white collar workers that appear to be of great
character and blend well in the society commit heinous crimes? For example, CEOs of multi-national companies such as Harvey Weinstein and film stars such as Kevin Spacey etc.
were accused and convicted of sexually harassing women at their workplaces.
On the other hand, people that wear cheap or simple clothes are not always of inferior character. For example, many great people such as Mahatma Gandhi, Dr APJ Abdul Kalam etc.
used to wear very simple clothes. Their sole focus was on what they were trying to achieve and not on their physical appearance and clothing.
Furthermore, many times judging a person purely based on their clothing can be misleading and very dangerous. For example, con-artists generally appear well groomed, well
dressed and trustworthy, but if one is not wise enough to see through the facade, they may end up falling prey to the con.
To sum up, a person's character should not be defined by what they wear, but instead be carefully assessed based on a holistic view of his / her personality.
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- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that there pictures are more effective than words.What is your opinion about this. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91636363636 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60478773312 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8915194281 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121192985386 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468695458728 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259380046352 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497326157856 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269768700258 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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