Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy? what other things in life can make people happy?
Money always plays a vital role in our everyday life. It is necessary to fulfil our daily needs or necessities. Some people say that money is the leading reason to be happy or fulfilled in life. Certainly, people can enjoy luxury things and live a lavish life with a plethora of money. However, other facets, such as satisfaction for a purposeful life, love, and care can also contribute to individuals happiness.
To begin with, plenty of money helps in reducing stress in a certain group of people. Some people like to go shopping or prefer to eat out after a bad day to change up their moods. Undoubtedly, these activities can only be done with a good amount of money. For example, last week one of my friends has gifted a car, to his wife on their wedding anniversary, just to surprise her and make her happy. Truthfully, she was more than happy to see the choice of gift, and this all was made possible with the help of a huge amount of money.
On the other hand, if money could buy all the happiness, all riches would be happier, but this is not a universal truth. Sometimes, we all need a few little things to live a happy life, such as compassion, love, and care from others. I believe that the satisfaction of having a purposeful life and being loved, unconditionally, by someone makes a person happy, too. For instance, many times it has been seen that many poor are happier than the riches because they do not fear losing money as they do not possess much of it. Although they have merely some money, they live a satisfied life because they have a purpose of raising their children.
To conclude, indeed, money can make a visible change in our Lifestyle. Admittedly, people spend it to buy their favourite products, which makes them happy. Alternatively, love, care, compassion, affection and satisfaction of a purposeful life are other ways to live a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64071856287 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63885768208 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565868263473 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4127712246 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399735175615 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123370797477 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962193131386 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255320107572 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076096261825 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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