Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy ? What other things in life can make people happy ?
Money is considered by many people to be one of the most important contributing factors toward happiness. In my opinion, it is possible for people to be happy even if they have little money and other aspects of life can play a more vital role in creating happiness.
On the one hand, most people claim that money plays a vital role in the life of many people. That means they satisfy their basic needs and do not worry about price if they have a lot of money. For example, paying for house maintenance is the common budget that people have to pay. Moreover, there is some problem that many individuals have to face up with, so they need to have a particular budget unless they don’t overcome these issues. Take treat cancer as a particular example. It is the common problem that makes most families find difficult to overcome.
However, despite the influence of money, I believe that other factors make people feel happier. Firstly, it is clear that family is the primary feature forming the whole society, so it will be hard to imagine how they can survive if they don’t live with their parents. According to a recent study, some children who live in a family without a mother or father tend to struggle with their present life. Secondly, freedom is the thing that some people want to reach with it, it means that they not only do everything but also take the responsibility for their own.
To conclude, several factors dictate how happy a person is in life, but money is only one of them. In fact, I would argue that family and freedom are both more important than budget alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5985915493 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33285742495 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1752605909 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348851914877 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113608158909 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849064556716 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210452332898 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685103301801 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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